If anyone remembers that one story of mine that I've summarized twice and supplied an excerpt of; I have the first chapter finished and was hoping for a small audience. If anyone has the time and is willing to waste that time reading words, by all means, shoot me a dmail and I'll send a copy. If not, doesn't bother me in the least. It takes a special mood to want to read just one chapter from a (semi)random guy off the internet.