A snobby princess that demands perfection from everything and everyone, a young suitor that is digusting in appearance and action and a 17-year old guard obsessed with protecting the princess. At first when the suitor stuffing his face with pastry's was introduced I felt the story to be a comedy but at the end of the chapter the mention of assassin's made me think it is action. The chapter is very descriptive so I enjoyed it a lot, the part about the assassin's made me want to keep reading. If you're still working on this I say keep working your magic!