This is amazing... o_o Except there's something off with her face... I think her mouth is a little too small...

her whole head looks like it should be a more petite body, this is still really pretty though

There is nothing off, thats just your imagination of the perfect girl i suppose. She has a bit of an overbite, thats all. I think it's hot.

This is nice. But I think it would look better with her mouth either open, or totally shut. Frikken awesome though

I think it would have looked better if her right middle finger extended towards her hand like her ring finger instead of curve round, the gap between that and where it should meet her hand seems too large. Also if her tooth had been hidden from view in the shadow of her extended lips it wouldn't look like a chipmonk incarnation. Well since these are pretty much the only points I can critisize I'd say overall it's brilliant, especially the hair and background. (sorry for commenting on an old post but it ws bumped up anyway)

This is one of the best pieces of work I've ever seen in kona, and I think I'm gonna tage it as a favorite, but still her mouth is really small and only if it was a little bigger it would make her look more mature and more perfect and i gotta say her fingers are weird and not exactly right i feel but still the hair the eyes the hole thing is outstanding!

Her head is just all around too small I feel.

Not too difficult to fix, as long as you have the layers well organized.