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Girl in the middle looks like a deer caught in headlights. Overall I like the picture especially the blur effects for the fore and background. But there's something about the middles girls face that feels odd. Maybe over sized eyelashes and undersized eyebrows?
It's a problem that I've had from time to time; the eyes need to be a tiny bit further apart and maybe slightly bigger too.

The depth of field blur is a nice touch but the blurred area at the top of Touka's arms doesn't really work for me. It just looks too forced.
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